My father My father is 37years old.He＇s tall and strong,he＇s very kind. He is an engineer.He often watches TV and reads books on Sunday.His favourite colour is bule. He lakes fish ,tofu and vegetable . 名师点评：

A kind father.A lovely daughter.I believe you are good friends.Love your father and love your family!You are wonderful.Annie, make an extra effort! 从安妮的文章中，我们深刻地感受到了安妮对父亲的爱。对于父亲的描写由外及里，由浅入深。老师相信，在生活中，安妮和父亲也一定是好朋友吧！在这样一个充满爱的家庭里，安妮一定会健康快乐地成长！任何时候都要记得：成功没有终点，永远不要停下前进的脚步！取长补短，安妮宝贝，你会更棒！！（快乐学堂特聘教师：周老师） 2009-6-5 14:55:32